Picture
Make: Canon
Model: Canon DIGITAL IXUS 70
Shutter Speed: 1/60 second
F Number: F/2.8
Focal Length: 6 mm
ISO Speed: 80
Date Picture Taken: Feb 16, 2008, 10:11:43 PM
Artist's Comments
With no attachments, like a foetus in a bottle, The obsolete house, the sea, flattened to a picture She has one too many dimensions to enter. Grief and anger, exorcised, Leave her alone now. - Sylvia Plath
This is an awesome shot. I love the motion with the hair flying at all angles and the vignetting at the edges of the image.
My only suggestion for improvement woud be a bit more lighting applied to the right side of the frame. As the eyes moves across the image it darkens a bit and thus loses a bit of clarity (mainly in the sleeve, elbow, and hand).
If you don't have photoshop you could try out GIMP too. I wouldn't even post process it even more personally. Sorry about that I didn't mean this piece wasn't good or anything. I really like it. I was just trying to give you advice for any future shoot that you do. Angualr lighting is awesome, but the corners and shadows can come out a bit harsh if they don't have enough.
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Devious Comments
My only suggestion for improvement woud be a bit more lighting applied to the right side of the frame. As the eyes moves across the image it darkens a bit and thus loses a bit of clarity (mainly in the sleeve, elbow, and hand).
Great piece though! Love it!
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